Axis by Octavio Paz
Through the conduits of blood
my body in your body
spring of night
my tongue of sun in your forest
your body a kneading trough
I red wheat
Through conduits of bone
I night I water
I forest that moves forward
I tongue
I body
I sun-bone
Through the conduits of night
spring of bodies
You night of wheat
you forest in the sun
you waiting water
you kneading trough of bones
Through the conduits of sun
my night in your night
my sun in your sun
my wheat in your kneading trough
your forest in my tongue
Through the conduits of the body
water in the night
your body in my body
Spring of bones
Spring of suns
this is f*cking hot, o.b.
i just love how paz, in both his language and his (s)pacing of the poem, really brings the element of the “hunt” to life
i have to post the actual español version one day
I too
love the sonnet…
deep as it is…
I still don’t get it.